You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe your problems •tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Alex and I am writing

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epistle to express my apology regarding the delayed moving date at your prestigious apartment. Fortunately, my company selected me as a mentor as per company policy, and my training will be held in America for two months. Moving

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, I cannot move in at your apartment next month. I really apologize for

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inconvenience. To be honest, I was eagerly waiting for my promotion and I do not want to miss

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amazing offer. Another pivotal issue is

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. My company will sponsor me only for the travelling

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expenses

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as accommodation and food

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would be on my own.

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, after training, I cannot directly move in at your place

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financial issues.

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, I request you to accept my apology and delay my move-in date. As per my perspective, the earliest moving date I can offer you is December 01, 2023. I will e-transfer the deposit amount after your approval. Hope you will accept my apology and understand my critical situation. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Yours Sincerely, Alex

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

201 words

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