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The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates different exports from Scotland to the UK and other countries of the world in the year 2014. The amounts are in billions. It can be clearly observed that most of the trades inside the United Kingdom were chemicals and mineral products,
while
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 the least of them were from agriculture, forestry, fishing and mining.
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, the majority of shipments
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outside of the country were business
services
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 and finance, health and restaurant
services
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. In 2014, 5
billion
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 chemical and mineral products were sold inside the country and was the highest income sector in
country
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,
whereas
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 only 0.6
billion
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 was earned from agriculture, forestry, fishing and mining.
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 indicated the lowest income generator
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in
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 the United Kingdom. Compared to inbound freight, outbound sell income was more than 10 times bigger.
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, best selling items were business
services
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 and finance,
helath
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health
 and restaurant
services
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 category. The inflow of money from those was approximately 13.8
billion
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 euros.
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, an earning
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 little as 2.3
billion
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 euros was earned through electrical and instrument engineering during the time period.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words services, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • exports
  • Scotland
  • rest of the UK
  • rest of the world
  • comparisons
  • total value
  • higher
  • percentage
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating trend
  • significant contribution
  • export market
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