It is sometimes said that social media friends are not real friends. Give your own opinion of this view, commenting on the best and worst aspects of online friendships and how face-to- face interactions are different.

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whose around us do
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unique specipres.
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can often be found
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chatting
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on
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. Social Media. So, It is useful to
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to communicate
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online funny and humorous wherever.
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find some free
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, we will be able to meet and spend
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, undoubtedly online
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advantages by way different
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close to us in spite of they might not be
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obtained
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