The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts illustrated the
graduate
's and postgraduate's direction before they graduate
(excluding full-time work
).
Overall
, the trends of both graduates
and postgraduate is basically the same, except more postgraduate tend to do part-time work
.
The numbers of graduates
and postgraduates in voluntary work
, further
study and unemployment is
approximately ten times different. The most common way before they Change the verb form
are
graduate
from college is Further
study, there were 29665 in
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UK
graduates
and 2725 in
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UK
postgraduate
, which is nearly 10 times. The number of Fix the agreement mistake
postgraduates
graduates
and postgraduate students in Voluntary work
and Unemployment is about 3500 and 345, 16235 and 1625, which getting closer to 10 times.
The statistics illustrate that the trends for graduates
and postgraduates are quite different. Unlike the previous trends, the percentage of graduate
students in Part-time work
different
is more than the previous one, with Correct word choice
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UK
postgraduates(2535) and UK
graduates
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