The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
map shows different areas
and the traffic information of the town
of Gralsdon as well as
the two possible spots for the upcoming supermarket.
Overall
, the areas
from rural to center
, in order, are Change the spelling
centre
countryside
, housing Add an article
the countryside
areas
, industry areas
and the town
center
. The Change the spelling
centre
town
center
is located in the middle southern of Gralsdon.
The S1 is in the countryside beside the housing area. Change the spelling
centre
In addition
, it is between one railway and a main road that connects to the Hindon town
, which has 10,000 population. People can reach S1 by either taking trains or driving cars conveniently.
In contrast
, the S2 is in the town
center
which does not allow private traffic. Change the spelling
centre
However
, there is a railway runs
through the Correct pronoun usage
that runs
town
center
and three main roads leading to nearby towns connect to it. Change the spelling
centre
Although
S2 is hard to reach simply by personal vehicles, it is located extremely close to the railway, that
people can access it by transferring to public transportation.Correct word choice
and
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