The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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map shows different
areas
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and the traffic information of the
town
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of Gralsdon
as well as
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the two possible spots for the upcoming supermarket.
Overall
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, the
areas
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from rural to
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center
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centre
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, in order, are
countryside
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the countryside
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, housing
areas
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, industry
areas
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and the
town
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center
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centre
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. The
town
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center
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centre
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is located in the middle southern of Gralsdon. The S1 is in the countryside beside the housing area.
In addition
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, it is between one railway and a main road that connects to the Hindon
town
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, which has 10,000 population. People can reach S1 by either taking trains or driving cars conveniently.
In contrast
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, the S2 is in the
town
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center
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centre
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which does not allow private traffic.
However
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, there is a railway
runs
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that runs
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through the
town
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center
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centre
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and three main roads leading to nearby towns connect to it.
Although
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S2 is hard to reach simply by personal vehicles, it is located extremely close to the railway,
that
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and
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people can access it by transferring to public transportation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, town, center with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • map
  • town
  • supermarket
  • site
  • overview
  • possible
  • transportation
  • access
  • surrounding
  • facilities
  • population
  • density
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