The bar chart below shows the number of men and women attending various evening course at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
The supplied bar graph illustrates the figure of
men
and women
attending four different evening courses
(drama, painting, sculpture, and language) at an adult education centre in a particular year (2019), while
the pie chart represents the ages of participants
who enrolled in the mentioned courses
.
Overall
, men
preferred joining painting courses
, whereas
women
preferred language courses
the most. Moreover
, a majority of participants
who enrolled in the centre were 50 years and above.
Regarding language courses
, the number of women
who enrolled in this
course was exactly 40 people which was 20 times higher than men
. Similarly
, in terms of painting, the number of women
who took this
course was higher compared to men
by 5 times. In terms of drama, more women
registered for the course compared to women
at 20 and 10 respectively. In contrast
, the number of male students who took sculpture was 5 times more than women
.
By looking at the pie chart, it can be seen that less than half of the participants
(42%) who enrolled in the centre were 50 years old and above. Participants
whose ages were between 40-49 years accounted for more than a quarter (26%). The rate of students whose ages were between 20—29, and 30-39 were around 11% and 15% respectively. The lowest age of enrollment was participants
whose age was under 20.Submitted by s_syedy on
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