The charts bellow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts bellow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts demonstrate the three types of
water
usage in six selected parts of the world. The data shows in the percentage.
Overall
, the overwhelming majority mainly employs the
water
resource for the same
purpose
,
while
the other ones
use
it for
another needs
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. The tiny minority of areas based on
water
consumption mostly are similar. Basically, in four areas
as
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Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America by far
highest
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usage of
water
is in
purpose
for Agricultural
use
, making up almost the same massive percentage – from 71% to 88%.
However
, there is slightly more than
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half of
water
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used for Industrial areas in Europe,
whereas
in North America
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a
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nearly half for the same
purpose
.
Additionally
, despite the main factor of
water
usage
the
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half of presented world parts like North America, Europe and South East Asia have the
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smallest consumption – Domestic
Use
, varying from just above 5 % and not exceeding the quarter.
In contrast
,
the
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industrial
use
stays
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the far smallest
purpose
to
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the remaining parts, constituting from a mere 5% up to
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one-tenth
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one tenth
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, purpose, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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  • Allocation
  • Sustainability
  • Efficiency
  • Industrialization
  • Domestic sector
  • Agricultural sector
  • Global trends
  • Water scarcity
  • Resource management
  • Technological innovations
  • Water recycling
  • Population growth
  • International cooperation
  • Water wastage
  • Sustainable practices
  • Water footprint
  • Resource allocation conflicts
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