The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph illustrates the changes in the sum of
Catholics
from six Use synonyms
countries
: China, India ,Philippines,Vietnam, Korea and Japan ,between 2010 and 2013.
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Overall
, in both periods, the Philippines was the country with the biggest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Catholics
, Use synonyms
while
Japan was the one with the least Linking Words
number
.Use synonyms
While
some Linking Words
countries
encountered a decrease in the amount of Use synonyms
Catholic
individuals , others encountered an increase.
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Firstly
, starting with Linking Words
countries
that have had a decrease, the Philippines started with over 75 million Use synonyms
Catholics
in 2010, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
became only 72 million in 2013. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
country was the one with the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Catholics
in both given periods.Korea has had the biggest change in digit of Use synonyms
Catholics
, having more than 5 million in 2010, and only a bit over 1,000,000 in 2013. Use synonyms
Also
, Vietnam has had a small decrease in the digit of the Linking Words
Catholic
population.
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Secondly
, continuing with the Linking Words
countries
that have encountered an increase in the Use synonyms
Catholic
population, China started from 9,000,000 in 2013Use synonyms
,
and grew to 15,000,000 in 2013.India has had the biggest increase in Remove the comma
apply
Catholic
citizens' figure, being over 10,500,000 in 2010, and increasing to 19,000,000 in 2013.Use synonyms
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