As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Agree/ disagree.

It is important for businesses,

besides

the primary goal of making

profit

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, to take their social responsibilities. I totally agree with

this

statement because

along with

its contribution to

the

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society, social activities can bring remarkable benefits to the

company

itself. On the one hand, there are strong reasons why businesses should accept that they have social responsibilities.

Firstly

,

production

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process of enterprises can produce hazardous waste, which has detrimental effects on the environment and human health.

For example

, toxic emissions from factories and vehicles which are used to transport the product

attribute

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contribute

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to air pollution and several respiratory diseases among people.

Secondly

, every

individuals

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share the accountability to better

the

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society, especially those who

has

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big

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a big

the big

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sphere of impact and financial capacity like companies and businessman.

For instance

, thanks to the involvement of Bitis, a Vietnamese

shoes

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company

, thousands of trees

had

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been erected in order to generate the

lung

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lungs

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of the environment.

On the other hand

, embracing social duties can

also

drive profits for

businessess

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businesses

in many ways. The first advantage corporations can take of

that is

to cultivate

a

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positive brand recognition.

This

,

as a result

, can increase

customer’s

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retention and loyalty since they once

know

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that part of the

company

’s profit

will

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be

channeled

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channelled

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to social causes near and dear to them.

In addition

, social duty

progammes

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programs

can increase employee engagement, which has an impact on how profitable the

company

can be.

For example

, a

company

raising a

campain

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campaign

championing women’s

right

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can boost the morale of their female

staffs

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at

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the first place, and

this

can lead to

a

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greater productivity. In conclusion, businesses are the first

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responsible

responisible

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responsible

group for social duties and taking those responsibilities can actually bring them back more profit in the long way