More people today prefer to live alone in comparison to past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

If we take a close look at the modern

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lifestyle

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and make a simple comparison with the way it used to be in the past, we will realise that individuals, today, would rather be alone

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than ever before in

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history.

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there might be several

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convictions with regard to the effects of

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, I am of the opinion that

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change has been mostly negative than positive. As recent scientific discoveries have clearly indicated, psychological disorders have become an

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part of humanity as the

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results

result

of loneliness. Humans are

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sociable creatures like many other species of mammals. They have always been living in groups and it helps them to get by in the wildlife and evolved to be the most sophisticated and intelligent

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our planet. Since living alone is not

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consistant

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with the nature of mankind, it has had some destructive influence on their

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mental health. Depression, as an example, is said to be the most common form of mental disorder which is related to the

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trend. Living costs,

on the other hand

, have been significantly increasing

due to

the rising demand for houses and accommodations, more

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in the metropolitan areas. Populace used to share

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apartments

with their family members or close friends, and

this

means that fewer houses were needed in the past.

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trend,

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life will

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continuously

become more and more stressful

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of the expensive cost of renting or buying a place to live in, and

this

can

also

be another root cause for developing depression. In conclusion, we can not deny the fact that living with others could be beneficial for our mental status from different points of view,

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it should be our priority to work on our social life and communicational

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to make more friendships in order to avoid

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loneliness

.