Nowadays culture is much the same all around the world when compared to previous times. Do you think this a positive or negative development

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contemporary era, numerous nations

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cultural properties compared with previous decades . I am of the belief that

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is a negative thing to be considered

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because each country has to have a unique type of culture.

To begin

with, culture defines the identity of a nation and without

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that nation will be similar to others.

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globalization many countries have been sharing similar cultural values and

this

, in turn, causes a gradual loss in the traditional cultural values which used to distinguish one nation from another.

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can be exemplified by an article published in Time Magazine which claimed that the internet is the main culprit that leads to a significant decrease in the uniqueness of societies. What can be said here is that

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cultural discrimination amongst nations is what makes each one special in its own way, and

this

will add an important value to the world by increasing the cultural diversity between peoples.

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, losing the cultural identity will have a detrimental impact on the psychological

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of the individuals. To illustrate, each society has its own traditions that make

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of

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the general populace proud of it and seek to spread it globally

as well as

pass it on to their offspring .

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this

valuable meaning of life might have a negative effect on the mental state of individuals.

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, future generations could suffer from some personality problems

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wasting of

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important cultural merits.

To conclude

,

after

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essay has reiterated the above-mentioned ideas, I can

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that the similarities between nations

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an ongoing issue and

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will

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a world

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uniqueness.