The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the present map of a
town
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called Norbiton and the
future
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development plan.
Overall
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, the
town
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will be changed from an industrial area to a residential area in the
future
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.
Instead
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of factories, there will be
housings
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housing
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, grocery stores, a medical centre, a playground, and a school in the
future
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. Regarding the present map, there is only a roundabout at the centre of the
town
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and 8 factories near the roundabout.
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Farmland
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farmland
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is located to the north of the
town
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, being separated by a river running between the
town
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and the
farmland
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. In the planned
future
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development plan, more residential facilities are expected to be built. There will be 7 housing in total, 1 in the
farmland
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and 6 in the
town
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respectively.
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to that, shops and a medical centre are anticipated to be constructed around a roundabout at the
center
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centre
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of the
town
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. To the south of the roundabout, a small roundabout will be built. To the east of the
town
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, there will be a school and a playground. A bridge from the
town
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to the
farmland
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, across a river, is
also
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planned to be built.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, future, farmland with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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