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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
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The line graph illustrates
that
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how
Australian
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in
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at
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the
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 young age
change
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changed
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 their behaviour
about
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regarding
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 consuming 3 types of fast food, which are
Pizza
,
Fish
 and
Chips
 and
Hapburgers
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Hamburgers
, from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
, 2 types of fast food
was
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 rocketed which were
pizza
 and
hamburgers
.
In
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 the same time,
fish
 and
chips
is decrease
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is decreased
is decreasing
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 considerably.
First,
Pizza
 was the least popular
in
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among
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Australia
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Australian
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 teenagers in 1975 with less than 10
times
 eaten per
year
. Anyway, Its popularity
was
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increased rapidly after 1985 and
be
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was
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 stable in 1995 with around 85
times
of
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consumption
 per
year
.
Next,
Hamburgers
was
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were
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be
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eaten just 10
times
 per
year
 in 1975, but the number of
Hamburgers
consumption
 was dramatically rose between 1975 to 1985 and afterwards slightly grew since 1985. The
last
 one is
Fish
 and
chips
, which is the only one that
decrease
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decreases
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 in
consumption
 in
this
 period. It was
be
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eaten 100
times
 in a
year
 in 1975. By the way, the amount of
consumption
 was fructuated from 1975 until 1985 and it
was sharply dove
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 to 40
times
 of eating
fish
 and
chips
 in 2000.
To sum up
, It is striking that both
Hamburgers
 and
Pizza
 were a growth of
popularlity
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popularity
 to consume in Australian teenagers between 1975 to 1995 and it
was
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steadily rose after 1995.
Conversely
,
Fish
 and
chips
was went
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went
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 down abruptly from 100
time
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times
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 a
year
 in 1975 to just only 40
times
 a
year
 in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, times, year, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Spike
  • Dip
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Plateau
  • Consumption patterns
  • Fast food
  • Processed snacks
  • Health consciousness
  • Marketing influence
  • Demographic factors
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Nutritional education
  • Epidemiological impact
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