The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph illustrates
that
how Correct word choice
apply
Australian
Correct your spelling
Australians
in
Change preposition
at
the
young age Correct article usage
a
change
their behaviour Wrong verb form
changed
about
consuming 3 types of fast food, which are Change preposition
regarding
Pizza
, Fish
and Chips
and Hapburgers
, from 1975 to 2000. Correct your spelling
Hamburgers
Overall
, 2 types of fast food was
rocketed which were Change the verb form
were
pizza
and hamburgers
. In
the same time, Change preposition
At
fish
and chips
is decrease
considerably.
Change the verb form
is decreased
is decreasing
First,
Pizza
was the least popular in
Change preposition
among
Australia
teenagers in 1975 with less than 10 Correct your spelling
Australian
times
eaten per year
. Anyway, Its popularity was
increased rapidly after 1985 and Unnecessary verb
apply
be
stable in 1995 with around 85 Wrong verb form
was
times
of
Change preposition
apply
consumption
per year
.
Next,
Hamburgers
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
be
eaten just 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
times
per year
in 1975, but the number of Hamburgers
consumption
was dramatically rose between 1975 to 1985 and afterwards slightly grew since 1985.
The last
one is Fish
and chips
, which is the only one that decrease
in Change the verb form
decreases
consumption
in this
period. It was be
eaten 100 Unnecessary verb
apply
times
in a year
in 1975. By the way, the amount of consumption
was fructuated from 1975 until 1985 and it was sharply dove
to 40 Change the verb form
was sharply diving
times
of eating fish
and chips
in 2000.
To sum up
, It is striking that both Hamburgers
and Pizza
were a growth of popularlity
to consume in Australian teenagers between 1975 to 1995 and it Correct your spelling
popularity
was
steadily rose after 1995. Unnecessary verb
apply
Conversely
, Fish
and chips
was went
down abruptly from 100 Change the verb form
went
time
a Change to a plural noun
times
year
in 1975 to just only 40 times
a year
in 2000.Submitted by tah.siwakorn on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, times, year, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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