The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The line graph illustrates how the percentages of the population living in the city of 4 different Asian

countries

changed every decade from 1970 to 2020; which

also

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expectations about city living

percent

in 2030 and 2040.

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4

countries

'

percent

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in

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living in cities

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over the given period. In the future, 4

countries

are expected to

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sustainability, quite similar to each other regarded

countries

.

First,

from 1970 to 1990, the cities living rates

increase

in all four

countries

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of Indonesia and Thailand

increase

stably from approximately 14;

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% to around 22 and 28% respectively.

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city living

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in the first regarded period (1970-1980)

is mostly remain

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the same

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the previous year; around 32%,

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sharply to almost 50% in 1990. From 1990 to 2020, the

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of

population

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the population

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live

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in

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the cities

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of Thailand and

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fluctuate

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around 30% and 46% respectively. There

also

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a big

increase

in

Malaysian

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and Indonesia

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reach

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around 75% and 60% in 2020 respectively.

Second,

in the rest period, 2020-2040, there

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to

increase

in 4

countries

and they are all predicted to reach those peaks in 2040

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to the given time. Malaysia will

increase

to around 85% in 2040.

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, Indonesia will

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approximately 63%,

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will be around 55% and Thailand at about 45%.