The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram chart shows how the
plastics
recycling processes are. From the store to reproducing and to be
Wrong verb form
being
diaplayed
on the shelf again, it contains 6 steps Correct your spelling
displayed
of
recycling Change preposition
for
plastics
products
.
The first step is
the
consumer Change preposition
for the
purchase
Fix the infinitive
to purchase
plastics
Change the noun form
plastic
products
at the shop and use it
, some bags and garbages Correct pronoun usage
them
those
cannot be recycled Correct pronoun usage
that
are going
to Wrong verb form
go
the
landfill. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the next steps are collecting and sorting, the plastic bottles are going to collected
and Add a missing verb
be collected
then
sorted at the sorting house. After that, the garbage trucks are going to pick them up onto the trucks and transport them to the recycling manufacture
to reprocess those Replace the word
manufacturer
plastics bottle
to be new Fix the agreement mistake
plastic bottles
products
. Finally
, the last
step is sending them to be displayed at the store again.
To sum up
, the whole processes
of recycling Fix the agreement mistake
process
the
plastic Correct article usage
apply
products
have
6 steps which are buying and using by Correct subject-verb agreement
has
consumer
, collecting the bottles which are able to be recycled, sorting them to prepare to be transported to reprocessing, transporting them, reprocessing them to be new Add an article
a consumer
the consumer
products
at the factory and contributing them to the shop again.Submitted by tah.siwakorn on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastics, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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