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The plan below shows a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

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The diagram compares the layouts of a single-person student
room
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 and a student
room
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 designed for two people at an Australian university.
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, it is apparent that the student
room
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 for two people is noticeably more spacious and has more furniture than its counterpart to the detriment of a higher weekly rent. Concerning price, the
two-person
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room
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 costs 350 dollars weekly, slightly above the one-person
room
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 at 200 dollars.
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 both rooms share the same length of 6 meters, the
two-person
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room
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 is slightly wider at 4 meters compared to the 2.5 meters width of its counterpart. The entrance of both rooms is neatly positioned between a bathroom and a kitchen area which is placed perpendicular to the doorway in the single-person
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, and parallel in the other; both consisting of a sink, a stove, and a microwave. Regarding personal areas, each
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 has a bed in the far left corner, which is in the middle of a window and a study desk.
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, the
two-person
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room
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 has an extra bed and desk to the right and is separated by 2 cupboards to form an additional private zone. Notably, the
two-person
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room
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 exclusively comes with a table and chairs in the
center
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 of the
room
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, which could be used for dining or group activities.
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