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The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates
numbers
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the numbers
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 of local catches and
imports
 of fresh
fish
 into Perth
in
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Australia for
ten-year
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a ten-year
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 period.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 local catches were the dominant supplier of
fish
 rather than
imports
, and in 2009, there was the highest level of total ... Regarding
the
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local fishing, the
numbers
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number
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 of
cathes
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catches
 dramatically increased, reaching a peak in 2008, with over 8000 metric
tons
, and after
that
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 there was a sharp drop from 2009-2011. Fluctuation
Imports
 were the least popular supplier of fresh
fish
, accounting for less
20
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than 20
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%
from
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of
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 the total number of fresh
fish
.
However
, the general trend
was
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gradually increased, starting from over 450 metric
tons
 in 2004 and ending with 782 metric
tons
 in 2014, with
a small exceptions
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, where the numbers fluctuated in 2005, 2006, 2013 and 2014 years. The
imports
 accounted for less than 20% of total fresh
fish
.The highest number of fresh
fish
 in Perth was in 2009 with almost 9 thousand metric
tons
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words imports, fish, tons with synonyms.
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