some people say that money is a best gift to give it to teenagers. some disagree with it. discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowadays,

youngest

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the youngest

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use to

celebrade

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celebrate

their birthdays and

namedays

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name-days

name days

with

relevants

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relevant

and friends. Everybody

give

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gives

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money

as

gift

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a gift

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,

insdeat

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instead

of clothes,

book

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a book

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or even a voucher gift cart.From one point of

view

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view,

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this

is a good present

,

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apply

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because teenagers can use them to buy what they really need.

On the other hand

, that present gives them the freedom to make

unnesessary

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unnecessary

buys and

spent

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spend

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their

money

budly

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badly

. In my essay, I will explain my opinion which is

somewere

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somewhere

in the middle.

Firstly

, I believe that especially the

relevands

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relevance

has

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have

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to ask

parents

if their kid has a need

on

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for

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clothes, shoes, electronic

devises

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devices

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and things that will be

usueful

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useful

. If

parents

give directions they have to accept them and buy something

relevand

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relevant

.

Outherwise

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Otherwise

, they can take what they believe will be better, and

this

is in majority an

envelop

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envelope

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with

money

.

Secondly

, if

parents

believe that the

teenagare

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teenager

teenage

mast

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must

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be ask

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be asked

be asking

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, relevands

has

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have

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to go in that direction. Sometimes, youths

has

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have

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so many things

in

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on

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their mind and even

parents

don't really

now

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know

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if there is a real

unseens

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unseen

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need. In that situation probably the celebration boy or girl

collect

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collects

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a huge amount of

money

. And

then

the spending marathon will

be

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apply

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start.

Finally

, if

this

can't be avoided,

parents

has

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have

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to take the

money

and allow

thir

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their

use only if it is

nesessary

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necessary

and really needable. To

conlude

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conclude

with my starting point

money

are

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is

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good as a gift to teenagers, only with the

suppervision

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support

and

colaboration

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collaboration

with their

parents

. If that can be

acheive

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achieved

achieve

, I believe is better to take presents like clothes, shoes, electronics or something that may

be change

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be changed

be changing

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for something else except

money

.