The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002,
The bar chart illustrates the total number of minutes (in billions) of phone calls in British, halve into local,
mobiles
, and national/international between 1995 and 2002.
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mobile
Overall
, it is clear that
the two of
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type
experienced rises, there were fluctuate in the remaining one. Fix the agreement mistake
types
Furthermore
, local call
shared the highest dial Fix the agreement mistake
calls
whereas
the
all calls had the lowest minutes.
Public and global had just below 40 by 1995 and Remove the article
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leveled
up sequentially over the years and outstretched crest well above 60 in Change the spelling
levelled
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2002. Change the article
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begin
well beyond zero minutes and reached Wrong verb form
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peak
at around 40 after Add an article
a peak
the peak
escalated
gradually from 1995 to 2002.
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However
, domestic had such
a fine kick off with well over seventy, surges marginally by four years, then
stick out sharp 90 by 1999 after surged marginally by 1998. Moreover
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diminished
got
the lowest calls by 2002.Wrong verb form
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