The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph describes the percentage of eating fast food in Australia by teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
, the most types of food consumed were pizza and hamburgers which increased dramatically. While
the rate of eating fish and chips decreased sharply.
According to
the chart, from 1975 to 1985 the eating of hamburgers jumped sharply and it continued to rise gradually until 2000. In addition
, the consumption of chips increased dramatically from 1975 to 1995 and reached 83% in 2000.
In 1975, the rate of eating fish and chips was 100% and it started want
down rapidly in 1980 to 82%. Verb problem
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However
, it continued to rise sharply until 1985. While
from this
year to 2000, the consumed decreased suddenly and reached 39%.Submitted by maltobi08 on
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