The bar chart showed the percentage of school children learning to play four different musical instruments (violin, guitar, piano, drums) in 2005, 2010, 2015.
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percentage
of school children practicing various musical instruments namely violin, Use synonyms
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for 3 different years (2005, 2010, 2015).
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piano
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percentage
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, the violin and Linking Words
drums
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.
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percentage
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piano
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were neck-to-neck. In 2005, the Use synonyms
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but they both had around 12% of Use synonyms
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Conversely
, in 2015, the Linking Words
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guitar
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Initially
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drums
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