Some people believe that government must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone. What is your opinion?

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helping
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country
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to solve their problem, but we have to control all
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, not only
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, give them knowledge about hygiene, about
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good
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understand why certain
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transfer
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goals and aspirations to hide their crime things.They are
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don't
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honest and
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leaders who try to make
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better, try to improve all human beings,
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peace in
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country
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as well
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get benefits when helping destitute
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your own
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if you let corrupt
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much power.
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poor and miserably
people
inside poor
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smart and talented persons who can immigrate to your
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statement richer and more
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new
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usefull
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as well. All we need is balance in everything
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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