The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the amount of
time
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given by parents in the year 2013, together and individually in assisting their babies in four different
activities
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.
Overall
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, the mothers were more involved in helping their children in all of the
activities
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. The participation of fathers was minimal in all the tasks. In the case of dressing and
homework
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, the mothers were highly engaged with their babies giving around 75% and 60% of the
time
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respectively.
Whereas
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fathers' investment of
time
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for
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dressing was trivial (3%) and had the highest
time
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allocated towards
homework
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which was
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just 10%. A similar trend can be observed in the case of fathers for the remaining two
activities
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where they had given little to no
time
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for their children. Both parents were involved in all four
activities
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as they spent a maximum amount of
time
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approximately around 70%, playing with children. For the preparation of bed and dressing both parents gave an equal amount of
time
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(50%) and the least priority was
homework
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where they invested slightly below 40%.
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,
homework
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was the 2nd priority of mothers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, activities, homework with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • time spent
  • Australian mothers
  • fathers
  • helping
  • children
  • activities
  • reading
  • homework
  • playing sports
  • general play
  • comparison
  • 2013
  • significantly
  • difference
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