The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line graph provides information on the average carbon dioxide
emissions
per person in 4 European countries: the UK,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal over a 40-year period from 1967 to 2007. In general, the amount of CO2
emissions
fell in the UK and
Sweden
,
whereas
the numbers rose in Italy and Portugal over
this
period. With regard to the downward trend, British people were responsible for approximately 11 metric
tons
of
emissions
in 1977 and
this
number fell gradually to almost 9 metric
tons
by 2007.
Additionally
, in
Sweden
, it started with almost 8 metric
tons
of carbon
emissions
at the beginning and
then
peaked at roughly 11 metric
tons
in 1977.
This
trend went down marginally to 6 metric
tons
at the end
of the period. In terms of increase, both Italian and Portuguese people were starting to increase the amount of CO2
emissions
. In Italy,
emissions
of carbon dioxide were nearly 4 metric
tons
at the beginning, and it rose to 8 metric
tons
by 2007. Meanwhile, in Portugal,
emissions
were under 2 metric
tons
in 1967 and it reached 6 metric
tons
by 2007, similar to
Sweden
.
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