Living at a place far from your native land will be difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

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the
place
where
people
live.
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place
where
people
born
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are born
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in
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and grow up in it. Living
at
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in
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same
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the same
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local
place
affect
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on
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apply
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people
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people's
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culture. In
this
essay
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we will give you some examples of benefits for
people
when they live in their
inationaly
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national
nationally
place
. In the
begining
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beginning
when any body
raise
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raised
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in
same
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the same
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place
generally they get
same
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behaviour, support each other when they need
, know
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to, know
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each other well, can borrow things from each other, accept
people
a culture,
every one
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will be kind to avoid
sight
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the sight
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of other neighbours. They feel as
they
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if they
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are a family.
Instance
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, my father
born
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was born
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in Saudia Arabia and raised in the same
place
, when he graduated from school there was poverty because
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of deforstration
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deforstration
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deforestation
and drying
that
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apply
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cause
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caused
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less production of
fruites
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fruits
,
vegtabels
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vegetables
, cereals, meat and
daietry
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dairy
.
In
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At
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that time my father's neighbours helped him to avoid death by
gave
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giving
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him some
foods
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food
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and water
for
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to
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drink because he lost his job and
has
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had
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a big family. If he lived in non native land he would
saffer
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suffer
from
deal
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dealing
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with
people
to get help. So, he was lucky to live in his home. Generally, I agree
of
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with
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living in
different
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a different
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land but there
some
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are some
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advantages
in
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to
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living
out side
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outside
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of
home
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my home
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country. Living
out side
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outside
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makes
people
strong,
have
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and have
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a varity
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varity
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variety
of
experiance
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experiences
.
Overall
, living in
same
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the same
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place
give
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gives
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people
feel
relax
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, safe and happy. Go away from
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the problem
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problem
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problems
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and
headache
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headaches
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of
live
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life
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.
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