Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The issue of attempting to preserve endangered
species
or not is a controversial one.
Although
the argument of some individuals
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these animals bring about no
usefull
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useful
purpose and should
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be let
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let
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to die out as many others in the past (
such
as dinosaurs), my personal belief is that they should be protected. the two principal reasons for
this
issue
is
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in
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the following.
Firstly
, it is vital that we appreciate the importance of endangered
species
in maintaining
the natures balance
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the nature's balance
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. Ecosystems
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are delicate arrangements in which plants and animals are all
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to
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each other for survival. The disappearance or introduction of any new animal
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disrupts the balance and negatively affects other floras and
feunas
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faunas
by breaking their food cycle and altering their habitat. These imbalances will frequently haunt us in reverse. As rabbits
introduced
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to Australia
while
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the settlement of Europeans, now they compete with native
species
for food and destroy
farmers
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corps. Elimination of a predator can lead to the plague of the prey
due to
the unchecked multiplication of them.
hence
, since ecological changes can lead to potential risks for us and our environment, clearly it would be
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our interest to preserve
species
which are in
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danger of extinction.
However
, probably the strongest argument in
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favor of protecting endangered
species
is that their life is intrinsically valuable. Even if these
species
are not practically beneficial for us,
nevertheless
they should be preserved.
Further
, given that human is responsible
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ruining the natural habitat of
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most of those endangered
species
, we should attempt
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our best
for protecting
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them.
To conclude
, I restate any view supporting the idea of preserving endangered
species
. Not only do they aid the natural balance of the planet, but
also
they are valuable in and
if
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themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • extinction
  • preserve
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • ecological roles
  • conservation efforts
  • scientific discoveries
  • advancements
  • cultural value
  • aesthetic value
  • employment opportunities
  • local economies
  • ethical responsibility
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