22.The bar chart shows information about the favourite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph below displays the courses that children from two middle schools like the most.
Overall
, there are big differences between both schools, sport had a proportion many times greater than any other subject in School
A. The other significant feature of the graph is that drawing is the most popular in School
B
In School
A, sports had a portion of around 72%, being the best-loved course. The other four subjects are all at a lower percentage, the next highest is science with approximately 18%, followed by math with 12%. While
only one-tenth of people liked literature, drawing was set to be the biggest loser with only 8%.
In School
B, the favourite subject of half of the students is drawing, which is the most popular class. The next most liked course is literature with approximately 37%, followed by math with one-fifth of students, sports has half the percentage of mathematics, while
science had the least votes with only nearly 5%.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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