22.The bar chart shows information about the favourite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

22.The bar chart shows information about the favourite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph below displays the courses that children from two middle schools like the most.
Overall
, there are big differences between both schools, sport had a proportion many times greater than any other subject in
School
A. The other significant feature of the graph is that drawing is the most popular in
School
B In
School
A, sports had a portion of around 72%, being the best-loved course. The other four subjects are all at a lower percentage, the next highest is science with approximately 18%, followed by math with 12%.
While
only one-tenth of people liked literature, drawing was set to be the biggest loser with only 8%. In
School
B, the favourite subject of half of the students is drawing, which is the most popular class. The next most liked course is literature with approximately 37%, followed by math with one-fifth of students, sports has half the percentage of mathematics,
while
science had the least votes with only nearly 5%.
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