The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of world during the 1990s. summarise the information by electing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of world during the 1990s. summarise the information by electing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart provides information on
unproductive
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the unproductive
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agricultural
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area
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and the table depicts the consequences for the three areas of the world through the 1990s. Generally, overgrazing was the biggest cause of
area
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devaluing (35%) and Oceania was the largest continent degraded by overgrazing (11.3%,
while
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unidentified causes were the smallest
issue
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that caused farmland degradation (7%) and North America was the small-scale field that degraded (5%).
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, in terms of causes of
area
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degradation, overgrazing was the biggest
issue
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that caused the devaluing of 35% of the
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, followed by deforestation which takes 30 % and over-cultivation was the third
issue
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that caused 28% and the other
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was the smaller cause which takes 7%.
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, concerning the result of
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degradation, the table shows that Europe is the biggest
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affected which is 23 %, followed by Oceania which takes 13 %, and the
last
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one affected at only 5 % in North America
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, issue with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie chart
  • Table
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Decreasing productivity
  • Reasons
  • Regional variations
  • Data
  • Summarize
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