The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of world during the 1990s. summarise the information by electing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart provides information on
unproductive
agricultural Add an article
the unproductive
area
and the table depicts the consequences for the three areas of the world through the 1990s.
Generally, overgrazing was the biggest cause of Fix the agreement mistake
areas
area
devaluing (35%) and Oceania was the largest continent degraded by overgrazing (11.3%, while
unidentified causes were the smallest issue
that caused farmland degradation (7%) and North America was the small-scale field that degraded (5%).
Firstly
, in terms of causes of area
degradation, overgrazing was the biggest issue
that caused the devaluing of 35% of the area
, followed by deforestation which takes 30 % and over-cultivation was the third issue
that caused 28% and the other issue
was the smaller cause which takes 7%.
Secondly
, concerning the result of area
degradation, the table shows that Europe is the biggest area
affected which is 23 %, followed by Oceania which takes 13 %, and the last
one affected at only 5 % in North AmericaSubmitted by misstiasclassroom on
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