The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of world during the 1990s. summarise the information by electing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart provides information on
unproductive
agricultural Add an article
the unproductive
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area
and the table depicts the consequences for the three areas of the world through the 1990s.
Generally, overgrazing was the biggest cause of Fix the agreement mistake
areas
area
devaluing (35%) and Oceania was the largest continent degraded by overgrazing (11.3%, Use synonyms
while
unidentified causes were the smallest Linking Words
issue
that caused farmland degradation (7%) and North America was the small-scale field that degraded (5%).
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Firstly
, in terms of causes of Linking Words
area
degradation, overgrazing was the biggest Use synonyms
issue
that caused the devaluing of 35% of the Use synonyms
area
, followed by deforestation which takes 30 % and over-cultivation was the third Use synonyms
issue
that caused 28% and the other Use synonyms
issue
was the smaller cause which takes 7%.
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, concerning the result of Linking Words
area
degradation, the table shows that Europe is the biggest Use synonyms
area
affected which is 23 %, followed by Oceania which takes 13 %, and the Use synonyms
last
one affected at only 5 % in North AmericaLinking Words
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