The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives data about world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the previous year. As can be seen, developed countries had the lowest
rate
for
men
and
women
, it was lower than 10
percent
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for both genders. in Latin America, Caribean's
rate
was higher than it was in developed countries.
Male's
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percentage
was 10
percent
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and
female's
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the female's
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percentage
was more than 10. In Oceania
men
's proportion was not high it was roughly 8
percent
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,
however
,
women
's proportion was was pretty high it was 20
percent
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. Estimated world illiteracy rates in Africa and in
Arab
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States were pretty
similiar
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similar
,
men
's
percentage
was more or less 30
percent
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per cent
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and
women
's
percentage
was more or less 50
percent
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. As the bar chart illustrates the highest world illiteracy
rate
compared to others was in South Asia.
men
's
rate
was more or less 35
percent
and
women
's
rate
was approximately 55
percent
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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