The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives data about world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the previous year. As can be seen, developed countries had the lowest
rate
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for
men
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and
women
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, it was lower than 10
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for both genders. in Latin America, Caribean's
rate
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was higher than it was in developed countries.
Male's
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percentage
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was 10
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percent
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and
female's
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the female's
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percentage
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was more than 10. In Oceania
men
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's proportion was not high it was roughly 8
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,
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women
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's proportion was was pretty high it was 20
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. Estimated world illiteracy rates in Africa and in
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States were pretty
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similar
,
men
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's
percentage
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was more or less 30
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and
women
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's
percentage
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was more or less 50
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. As the bar chart illustrates the highest world illiteracy
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compared to others was in South Asia.
men
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's
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was more or less 35
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and
women
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's
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was approximately 55
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, men, women, percent, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "more or less" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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