the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000

the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000
The bar graph describes the rate of using different transport in the UK from 1970 to 2000.
Overall
,
according to
the shape, most people in the UK prefer the used car to move from one place to another.
However
, travelling by bus had the lowest number maybe it needs more time. From 1970 to 1980 the use of cars increased slightly from 4 to 4.5.
While
in 1980 the percentage rise sharply to 9 in 2030.
In addition
, the second type was the car which jumped dramatically from 2 to 5
at the end
of 2030. There was a small rate of people who used the train. We can see the rate decreased slowly from 1980 to 2030 and reached 3 numbers only.
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