The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below illustrates the
GDP
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growth
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per
year
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for Tunisia,
Japan
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, and
Ecuador
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from 2007 to 2010. In general, we can see that yearly
GDP
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growth
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in Tunisia and
Ecuador
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is higher than in
Japan
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in 2007, but the
GDP
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growth
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increased in
Japan
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while
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it reduced in two other countries over the period. By the
year
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2007, the proportion in Tunisia was triple and double that of
Japan
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and
Ecuador
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respectively. One
year
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later, the data are similar for all three countries, ranging from 4-5%.
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, by 2009
Japan
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witnessed a steady increase in
GDP
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growth
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while
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Ecuador
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and Tunisia’s
GDP
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decreased dramatically in 2009, falling to 1% and 2% respectively. The tendency continued in the next
year
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and
Japan
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had a far better
GDP
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, which was slightly higher than Tunisia’s
GDP
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in 2007. Meanwhile, Tunisia’s
GDP
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fell slightly by a range of 0.2%, and
Ecuador
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’s
GDP
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rose from 1.2% to 2.2%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, growth, year, japan, ecuador with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Economic growth
  • Annual percentage increase
  • Fluctuation
  • Trend
  • Economic indicator
  • Comparison
  • Decrease
  • Increase
  • Stable
  • Unstable
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Recession
  • Recovery
  • Outperform
  • Underperform
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