The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the
GDP
growth
per
year
for Tunisia,
Japan
, and
Ecuador
from 2007 to 2010. In general, we can see that yearly
GDP
growth
in Tunisia and
Ecuador
is higher than in
Japan
in 2007, but the
GDP
growth
increased in
Japan
while
it reduced in two other countries over the period. By the
year
2007, the proportion in Tunisia was triple and double that of
Japan
and
Ecuador
respectively. One
year
later, the data are similar for all three countries, ranging from 4-5%.
However
, by 2009
Japan
witnessed a steady increase in
GDP
growth
while
Ecuador
and Tunisia’s
GDP
decreased dramatically in 2009, falling to 1% and 2% respectively. The tendency continued in the next
year
and
Japan
had a far better
GDP
, which was slightly higher than Tunisia’s
GDP
in 2007. Meanwhile, Tunisia’s
GDP
fell slightly by a range of 0.2%, and
Ecuador
’s
GDP
rose from 1.2% to 2.2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, growth, year, japan, ecuador with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Economic growth
  • Annual percentage increase
  • Fluctuation
  • Trend
  • Economic indicator
  • Comparison
  • Decrease
  • Increase
  • Stable
  • Unstable
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Recession
  • Recovery
  • Outperform
  • Underperform
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