The provided chart depicts the proportion change in the share of international students among university graduates in numerous states of Canada from 2001 to 2006.

The provided chart depicts the proportion change in the share of international students among university graduates in numerous states of Canada from 2001 to 2006.
The provided chart depicts the proportion change in the share of international
students
among university graduates in numerous states of Canada from 2001 to 2006. These represented universities have experienced an increase in the number of foreign
students
in the given period of time, though the most striking climb was in British Columbia university. As can be seen in the bar chart, the percentage of exchange
students
in universities
such
as New Brunswick, Nova Scotia and Quebec is almost the same, all under 15% in 2001 and more than 5% in 2006 respectively.
Likewise
, the
amount
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of overseas
students
in Manitoba, Ontario, Newfoundland and Labrador accounted less than 4% in the year of 2001 and considerably more than 6% in 2006. It is apparently seen that the proportion of the international
students
in British Columbia university was more than in any other universities. In 2001
this
figure was at nearly 5%,
however
, significantly went up and amounted
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