The pie charts provide information about rates of electricity consumption by raw materials in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000.
The pie chart illustrates the five types of fuel sources consumed in
Australia
and France
between the year
1980 and 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, In Australia
, 50% consumption
is by coal and the Change preposition
of consumption
least
percentage by Correct word choice
lowest
oil
in 1980 although
, in France
it's divided among the five sources evenly. In the year Add a comma
France,
2000
it's mainly coal Add a comma
2000,
source
accounting Fix the agreement mistake
sources
130
% in Change preposition
for 130
Australia
and nuclear power
having
the major part in Change the form of the verb
have
France
with 126%.
Firstly
In 1980
Add a comma
1980,
Australia
have
the major portion of coal with 50% and Wrong verb form
had
rest
half is divided among the three sources with 20% natural Add an article
the rest
gas
, 20% hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
and 10% oil
in contract to 2000 which has 130% of it consumed by the
coal and rest of the total production is divided into 36% Correct article usage
apply
hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
and 2% natural gas
and 2% oil
.
In France
90 units Add a comma
France,
is
sourced in 1980 which is divided between 25% coal, 25% natural Change the verb form
are
gas
, 20% oil
,15% nuclear power
and remaining
5% with Correct article usage
the remaining
hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
in contrast
to the year 2000 which accounts the
major percentage of 126 with nuclear Change preposition
for the
power
and the left over
units of the total are disturbed between 25% coal, 25% Correct your spelling
leftover
oil
and 2% natural gas
, 2% natural gas
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, france, oil, power, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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