The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Today, I will introduce

further

development

plan

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plans

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fot

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for

the Norbiton industrial area.

Overall

, Because of the land use variation, the majority of the

factory

will be replaced in another location.

And

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this

region will be constructed as a hostel area. At present, the Norbition industrial areas

has

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a ring

road

in the middle, with a mass of

factory

around it. On the east side of

this

loop

road

, there is a straight

road

paralled

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parallel

paralleled

with the

road

connect

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to another city, which

also

has a lot of

factory

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factories

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beside the roadside. On the North of the town, there is a huge

rivier

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river

divide

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dividing

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the farmland and the town. In

further

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development, we will

persent

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present

three main features,

convenious

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convenient

traffic, more hostel,

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and basically

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basically

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basic

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infrastructure

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the infrastructure

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of uptown. For traffic, there will be a bridge across the river to farmland,

also

a

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pathways

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pathway

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to the northwest of the

center

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centre

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and, the inlet T-

road

will be replaced by a loop

road

. For housing, all of the

factory

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factories

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will be replaced

into

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with

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housing, and the new

road

which we just

mention

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mentioned

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will surrounded

with

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by

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house

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houses

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. For infrastructure, There will be

a

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apply

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shops and medical

centre

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centres

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built in the southwest and southeast of the loop

road

in the

center

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. And a Playground in the pathways from the parelled

road

and a school a the end of it.