The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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development
plan
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the Norbiton industrial area.
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, Because of the land use variation, the majority of the
factory
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will be replaced in another location.
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region will be constructed as a hostel area. At present, the Norbition industrial areas
has
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a ring
road
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in the middle, with a mass of
factory
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around it. On the east side of
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loop
road
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, there is a straight
road
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paralled
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parallel
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with the
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connect
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to another city, which
also
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has a lot of
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factory
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factories

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beside the roadside. On the North of the town, there is a huge
rivier
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divide
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the farmland and the town. In
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further
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a further

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development, we will
persent
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three main features,
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traffic, more hostel,
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and basically
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and basically

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basically
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infrastructure
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the infrastructure

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of uptown. For traffic, there will be a bridge across the river to farmland,
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a
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as

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pathways
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pathway

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to the northwest of the
center
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and, the inlet T-
road
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will be replaced by a loop
road
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. For housing, all of the
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factory
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factories

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will be replaced
into
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housing, and the new
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which we just
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will surrounded
with
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by

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house
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houses

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. For infrastructure, There will be
a
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apply

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shops and medical
centre
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centres

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built in the southwest and southeast of the loop
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in the
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. And a Playground in the pathways from the parelled
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and a school a the end of it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, further".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words factory, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • residential neighborhood
  • housing complexes
  • green spaces
  • parks and playgrounds
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • self-sufficient community
  • main road
  • pedestrian walkways
  • cycling paths
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • connecting roads
  • new bridges
  • accessibility
  • transportation links
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