The given bar chart illustrates how many households owned and rented places in England and Wales during the period of 93 years.

The graph shows the number of households which

were

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apply

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owned and rented

accomodation

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accommodation

in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. 

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, it can be seen that most residents rented places from 1918 to 1961,

whereas

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from 1981 to 2011 the situation became

opposite

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the opposite

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: the majority of habitats owned

housings

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housing

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.

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the materials, the largest majority of people, approximately 77%, rented accommodations in 1918,

while

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the minority, about 22%, owned

it

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them

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in the same year. It is

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worth mentioning that the figures

of

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for

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owning and renting dwellings were the same, reaching a quarter, in 1971. The

percentages

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percentage

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of owning places

were rising

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rose

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from about 20% to 70% between 1918 and 2001,

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, the proportion began to drop in 2011,

hit

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and hit

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a low of nearly 65%. As can be seen from the data, renting flats was rising, from about 77% to 30%, through

all

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the years,

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later, in 2011, it became

increase

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increased

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, reaching 36%.