The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the future site arrangement and development of the industrial
area
in Norbiton town. The differences and comparisons are given in the paragraph below. As a matter of fact, the point of the future plan is all about replacing housing areas for the existing factories in the shown
area
,
as well as
boosting living facilities and accessibility through transportation. The
area
was mainly occupied by factories, with an isolated town centre and farmland across the river.
Furthermore
, there was no way to cross the river from
this
area
. There was merely a single road in the district which was surrounded by the factories. The newly designed proposal is to renew the industrial
area
into a residential one, with the construction of the school, medical centre and even playground.
On the other hand
, more roads were opened and a bridge was planned to make it accessible to reach
further
districts across the river.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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