The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of genders in varying departments (such
as Business, Law or Medicine) within an institution in 2012. Overall
, the percentage
of men was higher in four out of the seven faculties thus
leading them to be greater in number
than their opposite sex.
Firstly
, men held the highest percentage
at just above 80% in Engineering while
the lowest for Education at around 25%. Also
, In every other faculty it was above 50%, however
for Arts, the percentage
was below 50. Even then
, the number
of males were
greater Change the verb form
was
in
average than the Change preposition
on
number
of females within the institution.
In comparison, women dominated the Education sector with more than 70% and were higher in value over males in the Arts and Medicine department as well with 55% and 50%, respectively. Meanwhile, four out of the seven faculties still hired less than 50% of women. The lowest percentage
was under 20 and it was in the Engineering field.Submitted by Mazam on
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