The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of genders in varying departments (Use synonyms
such
as Business, Law or Medicine) within an institution in 2012. Linking Words
Overall
, the Linking Words
percentage
of men was higher in four out of the seven faculties Use synonyms
thus
leading them to be greater in Linking Words
number
than their opposite sex.
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Firstly
, men held the highest Linking Words
percentage
at just above 80% in Engineering Use synonyms
while
the lowest for Education at around 25%. Linking Words
Also
, In every other faculty it was above 50%, Linking Words
however
for Arts, the Linking Words
percentage
was below 50. Even Use synonyms
then
, the Linking Words
number
of males Use synonyms
were
greater Change the verb form
was
in
average than the Change preposition
on
number
of females within the institution.
In comparison, women dominated the Education sector with more than 70% and were higher in value over males in the Arts and Medicine department as well with 55% and 50%, respectively. Meanwhile, four out of the seven faculties still hired less than 50% of women. The lowest Use synonyms
percentage
was under 20 and it was in the Engineering field.Use synonyms
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