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The chart shows the proportion of working-age adults in four countries from 1960 to 2050 predicted.

The chart shows the proportion of working-age adults in four countries from 1960 to 2050 predicted.
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The figure illustrates the percentage of the
overall
working age
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working-age
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 adult population in four countries (
France
,
United
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the United
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 States, Japan,
Germany
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and Germany
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) from 1960 to 2050
expected
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apply
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.
Ovell
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Overall
, all four countries
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are forcasted
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forcasted
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forecasted
forecast
 to decrease in 2050. At the start of the period Germany and Japan
was
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were
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on
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the
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apply
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first and second places, respectively.
In contrast
,
France
 and
United
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the United
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 States occupied
last
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the last
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 two positions, but
France
 was 3 percent higher.
However
, in the
future
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future,
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 they
all
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are all
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 predicted to decrease. In 1960
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
working
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the working
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 age
popualtion
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population
 in Japan was 65.
Then
 it shows
steep
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a steep
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 rose and reached
it's
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its
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 vertex at 70
percent
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per cent
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 in 1990 and
falled
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fell
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 dramatically and
predicted
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is predicted
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 to continue
this
 trend. With
regart
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regard
regards
 to Germany, which was at the top in 1960, shows
decrease
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a decrease
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 by 1970, after it shows
increase
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an increase
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 and reached
it's
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its
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 highest point in 1990.
However
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However,
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graphe
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grape
graph
graphene
 shows
steady
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a steady
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deacrese
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decrease
 and will
contunue
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continue
 to fall.
France
, which was third
at
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in
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 the row, demonstrates an increase, but
predicted
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is predicted
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 to fall in the future and will occupy the second
postion
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position
portion
. Regarding the data shown by
United
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the United
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 States, it is similar to
France
, but will occupy the first place
at the end
 of
predicted
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the predicted
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 period.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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