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The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of
qualifications
 in
science
 for
Malaysia
 and
Singapore
.
Overall
, the chart shows that most graduates from both the countries are not of
science
 background and
Malaysia
 leads the percentages when compared to
Singapore
.
Firstly
, 60% of
qualifications
 in
Singapore
 are from those who did not pursue
science
.
This
 is followed by 30% of school leaving exams and
then
 20% of students qualifying with a Bachelor's degree.
However
,
Singapore
 possessed more undergraduate
qualifications
 in comparison to
Malaysia
.
Lastly
, the least number of
qualifications
 in
Singapore
 was the master's degree at about only 3%.
Moreover
,
Malaysia
also
 had the greatest number of
qualifications
 in fields other than
science
, at around 65% which was 5% higher than
Singapore
's data.
Similarly
, it shared the lowest data for the master's degree at 3%.
Further
, the second highest value belonged to school leaving exams at about 35% and again
this
 was greater than the value for
Singapore
.
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