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The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of
qualifications
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 in
science
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 for
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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.
Overall
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, the chart shows that most graduates from both the countries are not of
science
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 background and
Malaysia
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 leads the percentages when compared to
Singapore
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.
Firstly
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, 60% of
qualifications
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 in
Singapore
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 are from those who did not pursue
science
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.
This
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 is followed by 30% of school leaving exams and
then
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 20% of students qualifying with a Bachelor's degree.
However
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,
Singapore
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 possessed more undergraduate
qualifications
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 in comparison to
Malaysia
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.
Lastly
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, the least number of
qualifications
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 in
Singapore
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 was the master's degree at about only 3%.
Moreover
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,
Malaysia
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also
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 had the greatest number of
qualifications
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 in fields other than
science
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, at around 65% which was 5% higher than
Singapore
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's data.
Similarly
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, it shared the lowest data for the master's degree at 3%.
Further
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, the second highest value belonged to school leaving exams at about 35% and again
this
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 was greater than the value for
Singapore
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words qualifications, science, malaysia, singapore with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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