The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie diagrams display the responses of different age groups regarding what makes them most happy. As an overview,
people
categorized into two different groups have different patterns of happiness
factors according to
their top three rankings.
The survey showed participants who were under 30 years old found that their highest percentage is on receiving an achievement at work, doing hobbies, and having an attractive appearance with the number of 31%, 22%, and 18%, respectively. Similar to under 30 participants, people
over 30 years old also
receive their happiness
by achieving goals at work and doing hobbies, by 32% and 24%.
Instead
of having a good appearance, respondents over 30 prefer to have financial stability as one of their three happiness
factors. Placing on the fourth ranking
, both age groups have Add a hyphen
fourth-ranking
difference
Replace the word
different
happiness
factors. Which
Correct pronoun usage
People
people
under 30 have travelling
, Wrong verb form
travel
on the other hand
, people
over 30 received
Wrong verb form
receive
happiness
from spending time with family.Submitted by seyyuhhh on
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