Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is a prevalent perspective that all college students ought to learn whatever they enjoy,

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others hold a different point of view that students are better off restricted to

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subjects that will come in handy in the future like Science and Technology. I agree wholeheartedly with the latter statement, as

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will be presented in

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essay. On

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hand, choosing subjects that

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. People have a tendency to exert effort on what they find most enjoyable.

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, the same mechanic

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students. When they are allowed to

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to research what they love, that will result in higher outcomes.

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, educating pupils about

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that they perceived as undesirable sometimes ended up badly.

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, my friend in college

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abandoned his BA course after a few months because he

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not like the course. He switched to the restaurant management course in China and actually

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with it.

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arguably seen as useful in the future could

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greatly benefit the learners. The world nowadays is changing significantly with the prone to modernizing technology. In the next 20 years, learners of science and technology are job secured as there are predictable

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great demand for these two. At

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lease

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the point of view of a worker, you can still provide

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family through the income of your stable job In conclusion, people could achieve higher

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result

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when studying subjects they enjoy.

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I believe that job security and

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for what you learnt is more

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as that made you able to take

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response

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Varied vocabulary

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