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Some people argue that it is important for individuals and communities to recycle their waste, while others believe it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #individuals #communities #waste #responsibility #government
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 of reused
waste
 are caused problems in many countries , so some folks claim that it is
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responsibility of society and
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while
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that is
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government
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 responsibility , I strongly agree
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responsibility
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responsipelaty
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responsibility
of administrations because they have authority and
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 for contain problem To start with ,
government
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 is putting firm instructions
how
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waste
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in
addition
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 they are promoting awareness amongst people to learning people how they can
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waste
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garbage's
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 containers
such
 as paper , plastics and metals .on other hands , the administration
are
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 built many factories for recycling , so they are preserved Balance between
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 of used and recycled .
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 , some nations used
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 system to punish anyone who didn't respect
waste
 disposal regulations . to be clear
of
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this
 point ,
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people
peopl
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people
 obey instructions because they are scared of pay offences ,
that
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lead
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 us to build safe behaviour among
community
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the community
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passengers
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passenger
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throw
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wrong
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he
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 would pay 15 JD offence behaviour In conclusion ,
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government procedures will
safeguarding
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environment
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the environment
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put fit policy
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and
regulation
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also
by
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offered
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recycling
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wastes
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waste
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 and
reused
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again
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