Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant places to live and work in. For this reason, private cars should be completely banned from city centers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In megapolis cities a
lot
of problems with traffic
and cause
of Correct your spelling
because
this
people possibly do not want
live there. There is Add the particle
want to
extent
that Correct article usage
an extent
this private
Change the determiner
this private car
these private cars
cars
should be restricted from city centers
. I do not agree with Change the spelling
centres
this
and in essay will give different arguments and give examples for this
.
Firstly
, excessive car
traffics
actually not caused by simple citizens, because there are a Correct subject-verb agreement
traffic
lot
of cities which suffers
from Correct subject-verb agreement
suffer
this
problem
. However
, there are also
cities that bigger
but do not have a Add a missing verb
are bigger
lot
of traffics
. Evidently, it is not a Correct subject-verb agreement
traffic
problem
of huge
number of Change the article
a huge
the huge
cars
. There is another reason, infostructure
of Correct article usage
the infostructure
citites
and Correct your spelling
cities
this
is not from citizens, it is from governments or in other words
the scheme and planning of the citi's
road locations Correct your spelling
city's
was
not correct and of course need to be changed.
Change the verb form
were
Secondly
, the traffic
causes
Wrong verb form
caused
from
not an amount of Change preposition
by
cars
. There may be a single car
that stops all cars
cause of
accidents Wrong verb form
causing
in
the long highway. There are a Change preposition
on
lot
of examples for
Change preposition
of
this
. For example
, in
Change preposition
on
roads
there may be Correct article usage
the roads
situation
, one Add an article
the situation
a situation
car
's petroul
Correct your spelling
petrol
ended
and Wrong verb form
ends
this
car
will stop
the whole Wrong verb form
stops
duzens
of Correct your spelling
dozens
dozen
cars
or other
example is the Correct quantifier usage
another
lightoff
, because Correct your spelling
light off
traffic
light Correct article usage
the traffic
also
will off and there will be huge traffic
on roads
.
In conclusion, I want to say that Correct article usage
the roads
traffic
Correct article usage
the traffic
problem
is firstly
from government
, Correct article usage
the government
that
did infostructure for the city and Correct pronoun usage
which
then
the problem
of people, so it is not smart to blame the owners of private cars
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