You are getting married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. •In your letter describe who you are going to marry, •tell what will happen on the wedding day (the schedule), explain why it’s important him/her be at the wedding.

Dear Sahar, It has been a long time since we saw each other, what’s up? The
last
time that we spoke on your cellphone, your mother had a little sore throat, is she better at the moment? I have some surprising news, in fact, I am going to marry next month, and guess who he is? As a matter of fact, we going to marry my co-worker who introduced you at the
last
seminar
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autumn. His name is Ali and now, he works as
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interior management at my firm. I explained everything that we would do until our wedding day, at
first,
we prepared for an informal photo at my father’s house with our immediate family and close friends, and
then
we attended at official ceremony office located in the city centre at the 11 a.m. after that my husband and I hold a dinning party at my grandparent restaurant with a famous singer and his band. Since we have known each other for 20 years, I assumed that the best person who can lecture about me
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is you , so it is really important that you will attend my wedding ceremony. Again, I would appreciate it if you joined us, and in fact, I am available if you have any questions. Best Wishes, Sara
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Ensure the letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs.
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Use a more formal greeting and closing for a wedding invitation letter.
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Focus on the key information related to the wedding schedule and the importance of the friend's attendance. Avoid unnecessary personal details.
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Use a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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