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I hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing
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letter with the crucial purpose of asking about
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Saturday I saw the most important news
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laptop.
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news was very useful.
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is new to difficult businesses.
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, the one hand first and important thing . So
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thing helps by ours.
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, I hope We will achieve success with
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.
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ad has yet to be published in mass media. To be honest, I believe that
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advert. It will be popular in world markets. So far a lot of increased partners.
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Mrs Manajer, I hope
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idea really like you. Because
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advert
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absolutely and well done. Yours faithfully, SARVINOZ
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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