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The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The processed diagram illustrates the stages of the production of nuclear power using
uranium
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. Generally, there are 6 main steps of nuclear energy production,
while
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 some of the phases,
such
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 as 3, 4 and 5, could be repeatable.
The first step is
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 the mining process of
uranium
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 from the Earth. After that, there is the conversion of
uranium
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 ore and it should be enriched in order to make
Uranium
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-235
fuel
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 pellets, which need
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the
further
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 production of energy.
Then
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,
Uranium
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-235
fuel
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 is used in special generations, and
as a result
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, electricity is made.
This
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 process could
last
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 about four years, and as soon as
uranium
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fuel
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 becomes spent, it is removed. In that stage, there are two options. The first one is when some of the spent
fuel
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 can be re-processed and reused
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 so that
uranium
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fuel
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 comes back to the third stage in order to make electricity. Another option is when the spent
fuel
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 that cannot be reprocessed is stored in containers and buried.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uranium, fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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