The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015.

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bar chart illustrates how much money

invest

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in each source of clean

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energy

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the UK

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over an eight-year period. Looking at the

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perspective, it is apparent that the amount of

investment

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went up

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reviewing

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, wind projects absorbed a great deal of

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budget

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from 2008 to 2010 and after 2011, both solar and wind projects accounted for more than half of

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investment

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. With regard to the total

investment

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amount, it began with around 2.5

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pounds

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in 2008 and after

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going up to 7.5

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pounds

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, it

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roughly unchanged between

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of 7.5 and 8.0 from 2010 to 2012. The graph witnessed a steady

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trend starting

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value of just below 10

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pounds

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in 2013, followed by 12

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pounds

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in 2014.

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the bar chart indicates that the

investment

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reached a peak of 15

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pounds

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in 2015.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015.

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