Nowadays many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grand parents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In

this

day

and time, there is an increasing trend of both father and mother having their own careers. In that case, few individuals believe that grandparents can look after their grandchildren,

while

others argue that daycares can be a better option. I can partially agree with both views and

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will discuss

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notion in the upcoming paragraphs.

One

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hand, grandparents play a vital role in every child's life especially when their

parents

are working individuals and career-oriented.

Firstly

, grannies do an amazing job in taking

care

of the

children

by taking them on walks to the playground,

providing

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them

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with sufficient

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and healthy meals

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the right time .

Secondly

, they can develop a special bond and it will teach the young ones traditional and family values.

In addition

to that,

this

will shape them into individuals with high interpersonal skills and humane qualities.

For example

,

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grew up

along with

my grandma and she used to take

care

of me when my

parents

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went

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to work. She taught me many things like cooking , cleaning and other skills that

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cannot learn anywhere.

This

has helped me when

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was living all alone and when

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wanted to do all chores on my own.

On the other hand

, there are nuclear families who do not have their paternal

parents

to take

care

of their

children

while

working .

However

, there is a large number of

day cares

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available, where one can

enroll

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their

children

in

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during

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their working hours .

Likewise

,

this

will enable

children

to expand their social circle and

get

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new friends.

Besides

this

,

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care

centres

also

provide various

extra curriculars

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like drawing , painting etc to occupy kids during their stay in childcare

centres

.

For instance

, studies have shown that kids who are enrolled in daycare are more outgoing and are able to communicate with others at ease.

Thus

, childcare

centres

also

contribute to a child's development. In conclusion, it is the

parents

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decision and perspective on whether or not to put their young ones in

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daycare

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care

. Though,

centres

provide an amazing environment for the child's growth, enabling

children

to grow

along with

older

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the older

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generation is equally imperative in order to be family-oriented in the near future.