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Many teenagers now have their own smart phone. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion

#teenagers #phone
In the modern world, owning
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smartphones may
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This
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.
Noways
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, smartphones have been interacting with our
day to day
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 skills that we use for communication and how
it
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 can
cause
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First,
most students or adults have been using their
phone
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 for their communication and use their technology to help to
easier
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communicate with
our
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 friends or to interact without using
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global devices.
For instance
, it can remind the workers and arrange their planner that can be used in daily life.
On the other hand
, the negative side of
mobiles
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 phones was it may harm the people who
were being
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use
their
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 in various kinds of ways
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can
cause
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 how their
friend
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were being
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 using one of the individual that might be
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experienced
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 or
their
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cause
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other people to become expectation of how they were being thrown out.
Furthermore
, I think that the most important thing that might be caused by media can be caused by differences between those who were being used by their friends or there might not be
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social interaction between them and school staff.
Overall
, we have
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 amount of those who were being
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 of the mistakes that we have
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 by their friends or
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 by the social media that we were
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 with.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication
  • access to information
  • safety and security
  • entertainment
  • educational opportunities
  • addiction
  • excessive screen time
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • distraction
  • lack of focus
  • privacy concerns
  • social disconnection
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • opinion
  • outweigh
  • limits
  • screen time
  • online safety
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