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The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the percentages of
people
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 having different levels of science degrees in two
countries
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, which are Malaysia and Singapore.  Overview, most
people
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 in these two
countries
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 do not
own
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have
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 any science
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qualification
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qualifications
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.
However
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, the percentage of those who earn a
qualification
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 in science in Singapore is generally higher than in Malaysia. Regarding the proportion of
people
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 having no scientific degree, the majority of Malaysians and Singaporeans belong to
this
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 category, with about 65% and 60%, respectively. The category that accounts for the second highest proportion in both
countries
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 is
people
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 who have not finished their exams at school. Generally, the figures for Malaysia in these two categories are both higher than that for Singapore.
In contrast
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, the number of Singaporean citizens, who earn a scientific bachelor
qualification
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 doubles that of Malaysians, reaching up to 20%.
Master's
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A Master's
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 degree is the least achieved
qualification
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 by both
countries
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' learners as they account for just under 4%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, countries, qualification with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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